Comparing #109 (version 1) and #112 (version 2)

Use proper subjunctive
It’s arguably a sexually active woman’s responsibility to monitor whether she’s pregnant.

If it’s notit weren’t her responsibility, then a burden fallswould fall on the baby, which can’t be right because the baby only exists because of the mother’s choices.

It’s arguably a sexually active woman’s responsibility to monitor whether she’s pregnant.If it weren’t her responsibility, then a burden would fall on the baby, which can’t be right because the baby only exists because of the mother’s choices.

#112 · Dennis Hackethal · 5 months ago · Criticism
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