> We will update you on news, events, and do longer form write-ups […]↵
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> […] on the projects discussed in the talks, […]↵
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You mentioned the talks in the previous sentence. Remove “discussed in the talks” and instead say ‘discussed projects’ or ‘projects that were discussed’.↵
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> as we now have many more news sources we didn’t yet know about.↵
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Don’t explain yourself to your readers. Remove this part.

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> […] as we now have many more news sources we didn’t yet know about.

Don’t explain yourself to your readers. Remove this part.